From: Isaac Rodriguez
To: Mr. John Duran
Subject: stand information
Dear direct boss
I am writing this email to tell you about the information you asked me to investigate.
The organizers of the fair, I was given the information to put up a stand, The cost of the stand is one thousand dollars and the deadline to pay and reserve is the 5th of July.
I wait for your indications to make the reservation and payment, if you choose.
Regards
To: Mr. John Duran
Subject: stand information
Dear direct boss
I am writing this email to tell you about the information you asked me to investigate.
The organizers of the fair, I was given the information to put up a stand, The cost of the stand is one thousand dollars and the deadline to pay and reserve is the 5th of July.
I wait for your indications to make the reservation and payment, if you choose.
Regards
Isaac,
ReplyDeletePlease check the corrections I made according to what I imagine you wanted to say. Please consider the opening and the closing need to be more formal.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this email to tell you about the information you asked me to investigate.
(The organizers of the fair, I was given the information to put up a stand,) THE ORGANIZERS PROVIDED ME WITH THE INFORMATION WE NEED TO PUT UP A STAND. The cost of the stand is one thousand dollars and the deadline to pay and reserve is the 5th of July.
I wait for your indications to make the reservation and payment, if you choose.
Regards ( SINCERELY YOURS)
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